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murderershairNote: Still a draft which I might tweak later, still no pictures but a link to the CG. I have tried to describe which sprites are used when relevant, and hope like hell there's a reference chart of sprites out there somewhere because boy am I not capable of making that.
Dialogue in parentheses is Yui's thoughts.
Further note: I used shopgirl/owner/dress shop madam fairly interchangably here because I guess I'm indecisive. They're all the same person though.
In an alleyway
Yui, surprised face: (So we returned to this street, Kanato-kun still holding my hand)
Yui, cheerful smile: Hey, where are we going this time?
Kanato, pissy pout: It won't be much further, you truly tiresome person.
Kanato: Yes, I see that …Therefore, I'm going to inform you.
Kanato: We are now heading toward the dress shop Riz Impératrice.*
Yui: What? Dress shop?
Yui: Why would Kanato-kun want to go to a dress shop?
Yui: Hey, do you have to run an errand there?
Kanato, irritated/poutface: … It's for you, obviously.
Yui: Huh?
Kanato, getting really annoyed: If it weren't for your shabby garments, people wouldn't be mistaking you for a servant!
Yui, sidegasp: …!
Kanato, still grumpy but a little less so: When you look around this place, do you understand? Your appearance is strange!
Yui, thinking: (Certainly here my everyday clothes stand out, yet that doesn't seem so important to me…)
Kanato: If you weren't mistaken for a servant in those clothes, there would be no problem.
Kanato, sideface, furious: But since you were, those clothes are USELESS!
Kanato: You shouldn't be seen like that in the first place… why would you allow them to say such a thing?
Yui, serious/sad face: S-sorry.
Kanato, front poutface, calmer: If my neighbors walk by, I want your appearance to be suitable.
Yui, thinking: (I really don't understand unless, could it be that Kanato intends to be generous?)
Yui, smiling w eyes open: Thank you, Kanato-kun.
Kanato, still poutface: Hmph. We've arrived, it's right here.
Yui, thinking w serious face: (Here.. it's actually a dress shop)
Yui, smiling w eyes open, thinking: (I don't have beautiful western-style clothes like this, just my uniform)
Yui, serious face, thinking: (Are the incredible clothes of this shop really suited for me?)
Kanato, loudly: …Is anyone here?
Dress Shop Madam: (giggles) Welcome. I'm pleased to see such a cute, well-matched pair.
Yui, gaspblushing: Whoa… G-good evening.
Yui, thinking: (I was surprised… she came out so quickly)
Yui, smiling and thinking: (But… there's so many incredible dresses. Were they made by this person? Perfectly suited…)
Dress Shop Madam: Hmm… I wonder if you came to pick this cute lady's dress?
Dress Shop Madam: But what's this, you're… human?
Kanato: She's my special human burden.**
Yui, sideblushing w mouth open: K-Kanato-kun…
Dress Shop Madam: I see. Your burden is welcome here. But ordinary humans would be asked to leave.
Kanato, a bit impatiently: Get this girl something to wear at my side that won't embarrass her in front of the neighbors, please.
Dress Shop Madam: Certainly. Now then, let me get a good look at your face.
Yui, gaspblushing: Wha… y-yes…
Dress Madam: How very cute you are. And your style… (giggles) It's not too bad.
Yui, smileblushing and thinking: (Things like being touched in various places…even by a woman, it's embarrassing)
Dress Shop Madam: Thank you. The preparations are in order.
Dress Shop Madam: My dresses are not chosen by people to wear, my dresses choose the person who wears them.
Yui, surprised: Eh?
Dress Shop Madam: With that in mind, won't you please give me a little time?
Dress Shop Madam: Right about now, surely the dresses are having a great quarrel over who gets to be worn by you.
Kanato, sidetilt, giggles: That's good, isn't it, Yui-san?
Kanato: Ah, but then perhaps you will not want to wear anything that fights.
Kanato: Hey, Teddy. If no outfit finds her suitable, what should we do?
Yui has surprised face
Kanato, smiling: Her current appearance is not fit to see, so wouldn't it be better for her to walk naked? (giggles) That would be nice, wouldn't it…
Yui, sad/serious face: (If none choose me, what will I do?…)
Dress Shop Madam: What's this? I see one calling out.
Dress Shop Madam, giggles: It appears this can be settled without her going naked.
Dress Shop Madam: So then, here's a dress that is perfectly suited for your possession.
Yui, beaming: Thank you so much.
Yui, still with mouth half open smile, thinking: (..Thank goodness…)
Yui, thinking: (What sort of dress chose me…? My heart is pounding a little)
Yui, still thinking: (A dress that surely wants me. What sort of dress would be good?)
Dialogue Option!
A) Princess line dress
B）Short dress
Yui, big smile w closed eyes: Of course, wouldn't it be lovely to be dressed like a princess in a dress that glides?
Kanato, headtilt: A princess? You?
Yui, gaspblush: （What? I… I said it out loud...!?）
Kanato: Hm, then what kind of princess would you be? ....Rapunzel is good, right?
Yui, surprised face: Huh? Why Rapunzel?
Kanato, smug sideface w Teddy, low voice towards the last line: So you would always be tied up by my side, spending our nights gorging ourselves on desire... that's a nice thought, isn't it?
Yui, completely deadpan, thinking: (Was that really the way that story went?)
Yui, still thinking: (What kind of dress will it be? I'm a little nervous…)
Dress Shop Madam: All right, the dress that chose you is this one!
Yui, gaspblushing: ….!
Kanato, superhappy tiltface: Hmm… it's not bad. Like darkness, a jet black dress…
Kanato: I'm pleased. Let's take it. All right? Yui-san.
Yui, smiling happily w eyes open: Uh-huh.
Dress Shop Madam: Oh, I'm happy to have pleased you.
Dress Shop Madam: But it's this store's rule that you must try it on before you buy. So, shall I show you to the changing room?
Dress Shop Madam: Well then, you'll try it on thoroughly won't you? (giggles) ...It's good to take your time.
Yui, mouth open eyes open smile: Yes… thank you very much.
Sound of curtain being pulled back
Scene change
In dressing room
Yui, serious/neutral face, thinking: (This dress is beautiful, but I wonder if I can wear it?)†
Yui, thinking: (But, it specifically chose me, not wearing it would be rude)
Yui, sidegasp, thinking: (T-this is… how do you put this on?)
Yui: (Is this a corset? And those panniers… Ugh, how am I supposed to put this on alone?)
Yui, serious/neutral face: (Immediately this becomes a challenge)
Music stops, fade in and out for time passing
Yui's sprite reappears in a cute blue bra
Yui, thinking: (S-somehow I managed to get the underwear on…)
Yui: （My waist hurts when I move around, I can't get used to it)
Yui, smiling brightly w eyes open: Okay, now there's nothing left to put on but the dress...
Kanato, screaming offscreen: I'VE HAD ENOUGH OF WAITING!!
Yui, surprised face: !?
Kanato, still offscreen: Don't I always say that I hate to wait!?
Yui's face goes sad/neutral
Kanato, angrily working himself up to a growl: And yet… it's as if you're putting on clothes at this pace just to make me wait…
Yui: Sorry, I'm almost ready!
Yui, thinking: (It's true, this dress is almost ready to be seen… Nngh!) ††
Rustling
Yui's sprite disappears
Yui, thinking: (This is the final fastener… but wait… I can't reach?)
Yui: (What am I going to do? If I try to twist my body and force it, the dress could rip and then I'll be in trouble)
Yui: (Who could help… ah, that's it, I wonder, wouldn't the store owner assist me?)
Yui: Hey, Kanato-kun.
Yui: I can't get all the fasteners on my back, so could you call out to the storeowner?
Kanato, speaking slowly, on the edge: Excuse me? …Why should I act like your maid and do such a thing?
Kanato: Do it yourself, please.
Yui: But…
Kanato, as though she's stupid: But? But what?
Kanato, deceptively calm: Please, I don't want your excuses. If you can't even put on clothes, you're incurably stupid.
Kanato: That is, unless your purpose was to be seen?
Yui: No, Kanato-kun, it wasn't. The back of the dress really is…
Kanato: (laughs) …I understand. Then to make sure you're not lying, I'll check on you.
Yui, thinking: (Huh?)
Rustling noise
Kanato's smirky sideface pops up in super huge close up
Kanato's theme starts
Yui: Aaah! K-Kanato-kun!!
Noise of curtain shutting again
Kanato's face changes to normal/disappointed
Kanato: (sighs) You didn't really want to stop me, did you?
Kanato, smiling: ... Stupid and incompetent too, I guess there's no other way for you to be.
Yui: But...
Kanato, sidesmirk: (laughs) This is embarassing?
Yui: You know it is! This is… you came into the changing room before I was done.
Kanato, calmly: What's this? I go to the trouble to assist you, how terrible of me.
Kanato: Look at me. Turn your back to face me, please.
Yui: T-thank you…
Rustling
Yui, thinking: (Be that as it may, just as I thought, it was embarrassing…)
Yui: Um, Kanato-kun, this is as embarrassing as I thought, so maybe the store owner could…
Kanato's sprite has tears rolling down its cheek
Kanato: You're so cruel….
Yui: Eh?
Kanato, getting angry enough for voice to shake: You're so cruel! For your sake I'm troubling myself and even so you won't cooperate .
Kanato, angry sideface: And still, you drive me out… (takes a deep breath) You're REALLY a cruel person!
Yui: Kanato-kun, calm down…!
Kanato: SHUT UP!!!!
Pouty face sprite
Kanato, low yelling: If you're going to say the sorts of thing I hate it would be better for you NOT TO SPEAK AT ALL!
Kanato: Apologize now, please!
Yui: Oh… sorry.
Yui: But I don't mean that I hate you, it's just that it's embarrassing so…
Kanato, sidepout: You're embarrassed so you're rejecting me?
Kanato: Something like that… I WON'T ALLOW!
Yui, thinking: (Ugh… what do I do?)
Kanato, normal/sad face, calmly: But it's all right. I forgive you for it.
Yui: Really?
Kanato, smiling: Oh yes, in exchange for an expression of gratitude...
Yui: Gratitude?
Kanato: That's right. Or didn't you notice I fastened the back of your dress?
Kanato: I lent my hands for your sake...
Kanato: So, come here and face me please.
Rustling as he spins her around
Yui: Aaah!
SUDDENLY PORNOSAX
CG Here
Kanato: (laughs) Now you're all dressed in jet-black, I desperately wanted to see that white skin, you know?
Kanato: You look delicious… (bites) (moans)
Yui, thinking: (No way… in a place like this…)
Kanato: (gasps) Aah… (panting) The way blood trickles down, so prettily...
Kanato: (more blood drinking grunts and gasps)
Kanato: Hey… let me drink from this side, too.
Kanato continues to drink
Kanato: (laughs) You're amazingly delicious, you know. Yui-san.
Kanato, sweetly: Just by putting on different clothes, I really hardly recognize you.
Kanato: Well… it suits you, doesn't it?
Kanato: The contrast of black and white, with dripping red… it's very beautiful.
Yui: Kanato-kun… stop, it's too much...
Kanato, slowly, with faux astonishment: Ehh? You say you have only this much gratitude in you?
Yui: That's not it… it's just that…. nngh….!
Kanato continues to drink and moan
Kanato: In that case, let me drink even more, please. (laughs) Okay?
Yui: Ah…
Kanato drinks more
Kanato: (laughs) It tastes sweet. Could it be… you're getting aroused?
Yui: That's… not true.
Kanato: But, it's even sweeter and more delicious than usual… Do you want to drink too?
Yui: Huh? (moans)
Kanato kisses her
Yui, thinking: (A kiss… that's the flavor of blood…)
Kanato: (pulls out of the kiss, laughs) Your lips dyed red… as I thought, it's just too good.
Kanato kisses her again, probably licking her lips, and laughs
Kanato: Now, let me drink just a little bit more, if you please… (bites and drinks)
Yui, thinking: (To do a thing like this in the changing room…)
Yui: (But…I can't resist…)
Fade out
Fade in to the main dress shop
Kanato's theme starts up
Yui's sprite is back in its usual outfit
Yui, sidegasp, thinking: (Finally we came out… I should have just tried the dress on…)
Yui: (But…)
SUPER happy Kanato sidetiltface
Kanato: (giggles)
Yui, neutralface, thinking: (It's at least a relief that Kanato's in better spirits)‡
Shop Madam: Aha, thank you very much. So then… how was it?
Dress Shop Madam: (giggles) Your impressions of the dress. You took so much time to consider it, I wonder, don't you have any thoughts?
Yui, gaspblushing: That's…!
Yui, thinking: (Of course, Kanato-kun was sucking my blood, but are we exposed?!)
Kanato, sidesmirk: Yui-san? What do you think?
Yui, sideface: Well…
Kanato: (laughs) Why in the world are you embarrassed?
Yui: Because it's possible the shopgirl might have heard.
Kanato, laughs with smile: You really seem to enjoy being submissive.
Kanato, poutface: It's not bad for you to indulge in such feelings, so...
Kanato: Even with such a foolish reaction, you shouldn't be troubled.
Yui, surprised face: Huh?
Kanato:Although you're reluctant, the dress appears to be very suited to your form, I think.
Kanato: Particularly that black… it's a color you usually wouldn't think of.
Kanato, happy headtilt w closed eyes: I'm glad I chose this shop.
Dress Shop Madam: Oh my, you liked it that much? Thank you.
Kanato: Hey, Yui-san, please give your impressions to the owner too.
Yui, flustered but smiling a bit too widely: Ah… U-um, i-it… it really suited me!
Dress Shop Madam: That makes me happy. The dress is pleased as well.
Kanato gets close to Yui, smiling and blushing
Kanato, whispers tenderly: You're so filthy.
Yui, gaspblushing: !!
Kanato: Why are you flushed so red?
Kanato, laughs and blushes himself: But of course, you're remembering my fangs.
YUI SMILEBLUSHES
Yui, thinking: (Yeah…)
Kanato: You really are an easily embarrassed girl.
Kanato, happy headtilt: Madame, I'll take the dress. We'll make arrangements to transport it to my room.
Dress Shop Madam: Certainly! Thank you very much.
Yui: T- that's no good!
Kanato, opening his eyes: Why?
Yui: Well, such a high-priced dress, I can't accept it you know...
Kanato, annoyed: I say it's all right, so it's all right.
Yui: But..
Yui, thinking: (Yeeeah… That's not an excuse…)
Yui: Oh, but speaking of payment, how would you do that?
Yui: Um, Kanato-kun.
Kanato, getting annoyed w poutface: Could you try not to say such useless things?
Yui: ….
Yui, thinking: (...I'd better hold my tongue)
Kanato's theme stops midway through his next line
Kanato, neutral: I've taken more time than I thought.Yui-san, let's go to the castle.
Yui: Y-yes!
Yui, thinking: (Sigh... I'm getting tired of doing various things)
Yui: (But, the mystery of the Carnival Queen hasn't been solved… What is going to happen?)
Kanato, tiltface: So, let's go, Teddy. (long pause) What's this?
Creepy music starts up
Kanato, starting to panic: Hey, where are you playing hide-and-go-seek? Did you already leave? Teddy?
Yui, surprised: Teddy?
Yui, thinking: (What's this? Suddenly Teddy was nowhere to be found)
Yui: (When we entered the shop, Teddy was in Kanato's arms…)
Yui: (Where could he have gone?)
Kanato, calling out and shifting to the left side of the screen: Where did you go, Teddy!
Dress Shop Madam: Oh dear, did that little one go out of the shop alone?
Yui: Huh?
Yui, thinking: (Teddy alone outside?!)
Kanato, pissed: THAT'S IMPOSSIBLE!
Dress Shop Madam: But I saw it with my own eyes- I called out, turned away for an instant and then he was gone.
Kanato, upset: But that's… Teddy wouldn't voluntarily leave...
Dress Shop Madam: As it was just a short while ago ago, perhaps if you pursue him together you'll catch him?
Dress Shop Madam: If I remember correctly, he went out of this shop and turned to the left…
Yui, thinking: (I guess this is the demon world, so maybe such a thing is possible?)
Yui: In any case, we'll search!
Kanato, voice shaking: Teddy is gone… (starts to cry)
Yui: Kanato-kun, don't cry. I'll search for him too, so….!
Kanato: (sobs) Teddy…
*Translator's note: Confusingly enough, the clothing store appears to be named after a French dessert. Maybe that's why Kanato chose it.
**He uses 荷物 again, same word as the first chapter which literally means luggage/baggage. But I like this translation better.
†I think she means this in the sense that she's not sure she can look good in it, rather than literally having trouble wearing it, as she says that after.
††Literally she says よっと which I understand to be an exclamation right before making a great physical effort... I had trouble thinking of a good translation for this.
‡ The word she uses for 'relief' has very Christian connotations, more like 'salvation, grace, providence'
Dialogue in parentheses is Yui's thoughts.
Further note: I used shopgirl/owner/dress shop madam fairly interchangably here because I guess I'm indecisive. They're all the same person though.
In an alleyway
Yui, surprised face: (So we returned to this street, Kanato-kun still holding my hand)
Yui, cheerful smile: Hey, where are we going this time?
Kanato, pissy pout: It won't be much further, you truly tiresome person.
Kanato: Yes, I see that …Therefore, I'm going to inform you.
Kanato: We are now heading toward the dress shop Riz Impératrice.*
Yui: What? Dress shop?
Yui: Why would Kanato-kun want to go to a dress shop?
Yui: Hey, do you have to run an errand there?
Kanato, irritated/poutface: … It's for you, obviously.
Yui: Huh?
Kanato, getting really annoyed: If it weren't for your shabby garments, people wouldn't be mistaking you for a servant!
Yui, sidegasp: …!
Kanato, still grumpy but a little less so: When you look around this place, do you understand? Your appearance is strange!
Yui, thinking: (Certainly here my everyday clothes stand out, yet that doesn't seem so important to me…)
Kanato: If you weren't mistaken for a servant in those clothes, there would be no problem.
Kanato, sideface, furious: But since you were, those clothes are USELESS!
Kanato: You shouldn't be seen like that in the first place… why would you allow them to say such a thing?
Yui, serious/sad face: S-sorry.
Kanato, front poutface, calmer: If my neighbors walk by, I want your appearance to be suitable.
Yui, thinking: (I really don't understand unless, could it be that Kanato intends to be generous?)
Yui, smiling w eyes open: Thank you, Kanato-kun.
Kanato, still poutface: Hmph. We've arrived, it's right here.
Yui, thinking w serious face: (Here.. it's actually a dress shop)
Yui, smiling w eyes open, thinking: (I don't have beautiful western-style clothes like this, just my uniform)
Yui, serious face, thinking: (Are the incredible clothes of this shop really suited for me?)
Kanato, loudly: …Is anyone here?
Dress Shop Madam: (giggles) Welcome. I'm pleased to see such a cute, well-matched pair.
Yui, gaspblushing: Whoa… G-good evening.
Yui, thinking: (I was surprised… she came out so quickly)
Yui, smiling and thinking: (But… there's so many incredible dresses. Were they made by this person? Perfectly suited…)
Dress Shop Madam: Hmm… I wonder if you came to pick this cute lady's dress?
Dress Shop Madam: But what's this, you're… human?
Kanato: She's my special human burden.**
Yui, sideblushing w mouth open: K-Kanato-kun…
Dress Shop Madam: I see. Your burden is welcome here. But ordinary humans would be asked to leave.
Kanato, a bit impatiently: Get this girl something to wear at my side that won't embarrass her in front of the neighbors, please.
Dress Shop Madam: Certainly. Now then, let me get a good look at your face.
Yui, gaspblushing: Wha… y-yes…
Dress Madam: How very cute you are. And your style… (giggles) It's not too bad.
Yui, smileblushing and thinking: (Things like being touched in various places…even by a woman, it's embarrassing)
Dress Shop Madam: Thank you. The preparations are in order.
Dress Shop Madam: My dresses are not chosen by people to wear, my dresses choose the person who wears them.
Yui, surprised: Eh?
Dress Shop Madam: With that in mind, won't you please give me a little time?
Dress Shop Madam: Right about now, surely the dresses are having a great quarrel over who gets to be worn by you.
Kanato, sidetilt, giggles: That's good, isn't it, Yui-san?
Kanato: Ah, but then perhaps you will not want to wear anything that fights.
Kanato: Hey, Teddy. If no outfit finds her suitable, what should we do?
Yui has surprised face
Kanato, smiling: Her current appearance is not fit to see, so wouldn't it be better for her to walk naked? (giggles) That would be nice, wouldn't it…
Yui, sad/serious face: (If none choose me, what will I do?…)
Dress Shop Madam: What's this? I see one calling out.
Dress Shop Madam, giggles: It appears this can be settled without her going naked.
Dress Shop Madam: So then, here's a dress that is perfectly suited for your possession.
Yui, beaming: Thank you so much.
Yui, still with mouth half open smile, thinking: (..Thank goodness…)
Yui, thinking: (What sort of dress chose me…? My heart is pounding a little)
Yui, still thinking: (A dress that surely wants me. What sort of dress would be good?)
Dialogue Option!
A) Princess line dress
B）Short dress
Yui, big smile w closed eyes: Of course, wouldn't it be lovely to be dressed like a princess in a dress that glides?
Kanato, headtilt: A princess? You?
Yui, gaspblush: （What? I… I said it out loud...!?）
Kanato: Hm, then what kind of princess would you be? ....Rapunzel is good, right?
Yui, surprised face: Huh? Why Rapunzel?
Kanato, smug sideface w Teddy, low voice towards the last line: So you would always be tied up by my side, spending our nights gorging ourselves on desire... that's a nice thought, isn't it?
Yui, completely deadpan, thinking: (Was that really the way that story went?)
Yui, still thinking: (What kind of dress will it be? I'm a little nervous…)
Dress Shop Madam: All right, the dress that chose you is this one!
Yui, gaspblushing: ….!
Kanato, superhappy tiltface: Hmm… it's not bad. Like darkness, a jet black dress…
Kanato: I'm pleased. Let's take it. All right? Yui-san.
Yui, smiling happily w eyes open: Uh-huh.
Dress Shop Madam: Oh, I'm happy to have pleased you.
Dress Shop Madam: But it's this store's rule that you must try it on before you buy. So, shall I show you to the changing room?
Dress Shop Madam: Well then, you'll try it on thoroughly won't you? (giggles) ...It's good to take your time.
Yui, mouth open eyes open smile: Yes… thank you very much.
Sound of curtain being pulled back
Scene change
In dressing room
Yui, serious/neutral face, thinking: (This dress is beautiful, but I wonder if I can wear it?)†
Yui, thinking: (But, it specifically chose me, not wearing it would be rude)
Yui, sidegasp, thinking: (T-this is… how do you put this on?)
Yui: (Is this a corset? And those panniers… Ugh, how am I supposed to put this on alone?)
Yui, serious/neutral face: (Immediately this becomes a challenge)
Music stops, fade in and out for time passing
Yui's sprite reappears in a cute blue bra
Yui, thinking: (S-somehow I managed to get the underwear on…)
Yui: （My waist hurts when I move around, I can't get used to it)
Yui, smiling brightly w eyes open: Okay, now there's nothing left to put on but the dress...
Kanato, screaming offscreen: I'VE HAD ENOUGH OF WAITING!!
Yui, surprised face: !?
Kanato, still offscreen: Don't I always say that I hate to wait!?
Yui's face goes sad/neutral
Kanato, angrily working himself up to a growl: And yet… it's as if you're putting on clothes at this pace just to make me wait…
Yui: Sorry, I'm almost ready!
Yui, thinking: (It's true, this dress is almost ready to be seen… Nngh!) ††
Rustling
Yui's sprite disappears
Yui, thinking: (This is the final fastener… but wait… I can't reach?)
Yui: (What am I going to do? If I try to twist my body and force it, the dress could rip and then I'll be in trouble)
Yui: (Who could help… ah, that's it, I wonder, wouldn't the store owner assist me?)
Yui: Hey, Kanato-kun.
Yui: I can't get all the fasteners on my back, so could you call out to the storeowner?
Kanato, speaking slowly, on the edge: Excuse me? …Why should I act like your maid and do such a thing?
Kanato: Do it yourself, please.
Yui: But…
Kanato, as though she's stupid: But? But what?
Kanato, deceptively calm: Please, I don't want your excuses. If you can't even put on clothes, you're incurably stupid.
Kanato: That is, unless your purpose was to be seen?
Yui: No, Kanato-kun, it wasn't. The back of the dress really is…
Kanato: (laughs) …I understand. Then to make sure you're not lying, I'll check on you.
Yui, thinking: (Huh?)
Rustling noise
Kanato's smirky sideface pops up in super huge close up
Kanato's theme starts
Yui: Aaah! K-Kanato-kun!!
Noise of curtain shutting again
Kanato's face changes to normal/disappointed
Kanato: (sighs) You didn't really want to stop me, did you?
Kanato, smiling: ... Stupid and incompetent too, I guess there's no other way for you to be.
Yui: But...
Kanato, sidesmirk: (laughs) This is embarassing?
Yui: You know it is! This is… you came into the changing room before I was done.
Kanato, calmly: What's this? I go to the trouble to assist you, how terrible of me.
Kanato: Look at me. Turn your back to face me, please.
Yui: T-thank you…
Rustling
Yui, thinking: (Be that as it may, just as I thought, it was embarrassing…)
Yui: Um, Kanato-kun, this is as embarrassing as I thought, so maybe the store owner could…
Kanato's sprite has tears rolling down its cheek
Kanato: You're so cruel….
Yui: Eh?
Kanato, getting angry enough for voice to shake: You're so cruel! For your sake I'm troubling myself and even so you won't cooperate .
Kanato, angry sideface: And still, you drive me out… (takes a deep breath) You're REALLY a cruel person!
Yui: Kanato-kun, calm down…!
Kanato: SHUT UP!!!!
Pouty face sprite
Kanato, low yelling: If you're going to say the sorts of thing I hate it would be better for you NOT TO SPEAK AT ALL!
Kanato: Apologize now, please!
Yui: Oh… sorry.
Yui: But I don't mean that I hate you, it's just that it's embarrassing so…
Kanato, sidepout: You're embarrassed so you're rejecting me?
Kanato: Something like that… I WON'T ALLOW!
Yui, thinking: (Ugh… what do I do?)
Kanato, normal/sad face, calmly: But it's all right. I forgive you for it.
Yui: Really?
Kanato, smiling: Oh yes, in exchange for an expression of gratitude...
Yui: Gratitude?
Kanato: That's right. Or didn't you notice I fastened the back of your dress?
Kanato: I lent my hands for your sake...
Kanato: So, come here and face me please.
Rustling as he spins her around
Yui: Aaah!
SUDDENLY PORNOSAX
CG Here
Kanato: (laughs) Now you're all dressed in jet-black, I desperately wanted to see that white skin, you know?
Kanato: You look delicious… (bites) (moans)
Yui, thinking: (No way… in a place like this…)
Kanato: (gasps) Aah… (panting) The way blood trickles down, so prettily...
Kanato: (more blood drinking grunts and gasps)
Kanato: Hey… let me drink from this side, too.
Kanato continues to drink
Kanato: (laughs) You're amazingly delicious, you know. Yui-san.
Kanato, sweetly: Just by putting on different clothes, I really hardly recognize you.
Kanato: Well… it suits you, doesn't it?
Kanato: The contrast of black and white, with dripping red… it's very beautiful.
Yui: Kanato-kun… stop, it's too much...
Kanato, slowly, with faux astonishment: Ehh? You say you have only this much gratitude in you?
Yui: That's not it… it's just that…. nngh….!
Kanato continues to drink and moan
Kanato: In that case, let me drink even more, please. (laughs) Okay?
Yui: Ah…
Kanato drinks more
Kanato: (laughs) It tastes sweet. Could it be… you're getting aroused?
Yui: That's… not true.
Kanato: But, it's even sweeter and more delicious than usual… Do you want to drink too?
Yui: Huh? (moans)
Kanato kisses her
Yui, thinking: (A kiss… that's the flavor of blood…)
Kanato: (pulls out of the kiss, laughs) Your lips dyed red… as I thought, it's just too good.
Kanato kisses her again, probably licking her lips, and laughs
Kanato: Now, let me drink just a little bit more, if you please… (bites and drinks)
Yui, thinking: (To do a thing like this in the changing room…)
Yui: (But…I can't resist…)
Fade out
Fade in to the main dress shop
Kanato's theme starts up
Yui's sprite is back in its usual outfit
Yui, sidegasp, thinking: (Finally we came out… I should have just tried the dress on…)
Yui: (But…)
SUPER happy Kanato sidetiltface
Kanato: (giggles)
Yui, neutralface, thinking: (It's at least a relief that Kanato's in better spirits)‡
Shop Madam: Aha, thank you very much. So then… how was it?
Dress Shop Madam: (giggles) Your impressions of the dress. You took so much time to consider it, I wonder, don't you have any thoughts?
Yui, gaspblushing: That's…!
Yui, thinking: (Of course, Kanato-kun was sucking my blood, but are we exposed?!)
Kanato, sidesmirk: Yui-san? What do you think?
Yui, sideface: Well…
Kanato: (laughs) Why in the world are you embarrassed?
Yui: Because it's possible the shopgirl might have heard.
Kanato, laughs with smile: You really seem to enjoy being submissive.
Kanato, poutface: It's not bad for you to indulge in such feelings, so...
Kanato: Even with such a foolish reaction, you shouldn't be troubled.
Yui, surprised face: Huh?
Kanato:Although you're reluctant, the dress appears to be very suited to your form, I think.
Kanato: Particularly that black… it's a color you usually wouldn't think of.
Kanato, happy headtilt w closed eyes: I'm glad I chose this shop.
Dress Shop Madam: Oh my, you liked it that much? Thank you.
Kanato: Hey, Yui-san, please give your impressions to the owner too.
Yui, flustered but smiling a bit too widely: Ah… U-um, i-it… it really suited me!
Dress Shop Madam: That makes me happy. The dress is pleased as well.
Kanato gets close to Yui, smiling and blushing
Kanato, whispers tenderly: You're so filthy.
Yui, gaspblushing: !!
Kanato: Why are you flushed so red?
Kanato, laughs and blushes himself: But of course, you're remembering my fangs.
YUI SMILEBLUSHES
Yui, thinking: (Yeah…)
Kanato: You really are an easily embarrassed girl.
Kanato, happy headtilt: Madame, I'll take the dress. We'll make arrangements to transport it to my room.
Dress Shop Madam: Certainly! Thank you very much.
Yui: T- that's no good!
Kanato, opening his eyes: Why?
Yui: Well, such a high-priced dress, I can't accept it you know...
Kanato, annoyed: I say it's all right, so it's all right.
Yui: But..
Yui, thinking: (Yeeeah… That's not an excuse…)
Yui: Oh, but speaking of payment, how would you do that?
Yui: Um, Kanato-kun.
Kanato, getting annoyed w poutface: Could you try not to say such useless things?
Yui: ….
Yui, thinking: (...I'd better hold my tongue)
Kanato's theme stops midway through his next line
Kanato, neutral: I've taken more time than I thought.Yui-san, let's go to the castle.
Yui: Y-yes!
Yui, thinking: (Sigh... I'm getting tired of doing various things)
Yui: (But, the mystery of the Carnival Queen hasn't been solved… What is going to happen?)
Kanato, tiltface: So, let's go, Teddy. (long pause) What's this?
Creepy music starts up
Kanato, starting to panic: Hey, where are you playing hide-and-go-seek? Did you already leave? Teddy?
Yui, surprised: Teddy?
Yui, thinking: (What's this? Suddenly Teddy was nowhere to be found)
Yui: (When we entered the shop, Teddy was in Kanato's arms…)
Yui: (Where could he have gone?)
Kanato, calling out and shifting to the left side of the screen: Where did you go, Teddy!
Dress Shop Madam: Oh dear, did that little one go out of the shop alone?
Yui: Huh?
Yui, thinking: (Teddy alone outside?!)
Kanato, pissed: THAT'S IMPOSSIBLE!
Dress Shop Madam: But I saw it with my own eyes- I called out, turned away for an instant and then he was gone.
Kanato, upset: But that's… Teddy wouldn't voluntarily leave...
Dress Shop Madam: As it was just a short while ago ago, perhaps if you pursue him together you'll catch him?
Dress Shop Madam: If I remember correctly, he went out of this shop and turned to the left…
Yui, thinking: (I guess this is the demon world, so maybe such a thing is possible?)
Yui: In any case, we'll search!
Kanato, voice shaking: Teddy is gone… (starts to cry)
Yui: Kanato-kun, don't cry. I'll search for him too, so….!
Kanato: (sobs) Teddy…
*Translator's note: Confusingly enough, the clothing store appears to be named after a French dessert. Maybe that's why Kanato chose it.
**He uses 荷物 again, same word as the first chapter which literally means luggage/baggage. But I like this translation better.
†I think she means this in the sense that she's not sure she can look good in it, rather than literally having trouble wearing it, as she says that after.
††Literally she says よっと which I understand to be an exclamation right before making a great physical effort... I had trouble thinking of a good translation for this.
‡ The word she uses for 'relief' has very Christian connotations, more like 'salvation, grace, providence'
